Practice prompt
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A family is setting up a picnic while dark clouds approach. Predict what will happen next.
Response plan
Visible clue → prediction → reason/consequence → second clue → second prediction
Original sample answer
I think the family will start packing the food back into their bags very soon. The sky behind them is becoming dark, and the wind appears to be getting stronger, so rain is probably approaching. The parents may ask the children to collect the toys while they move the cooler and blankets toward the car. If the rain begins suddenly, they will likely take shelter in the nearby pavilion instead of leaving immediately. I also expect the park to become quieter because the other families in the background will probably make the same decision.
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